Feedback

After our feedback session with Esther, I am feeling very positive that the film can be increased in length whilst still retaining it's overall narrative and objective. There were some good points about what worked and what didn't that watching it back in a final project revealed to us and Esther was able to make suggestions about adding in another section of footage we didn't think was usable in a different area so that it might work. We will definitely be trying this in our next edit next Tuesday. Aside from this, she was able to comment on the narrative of the piece so I feel successful in communicating that this is a pebbles journey and the different things that happen to it to move it around the location. She made a great point about a possible shot incorporating the farmers walls that the pebble could have chipped off from, that had we thought of it in advance, I think would have enhanced our film, however, the absence of this type of shot only serves as a reminder of my previous thought to make sure to film extra shots than you originally think of that may help to improve a narrative.