Thursday, 24 November 2011

Feedback from our Tutorial

One point that has stuck with me from the tutorial with Esther today, was to use the internal commentary of a cleaner. Our original idea had included an office workers occasional comments but I can see how the use of a cleaner could create an interesting dynamic to the piece, a different viewpoint and therefore the piece could have a completely different outcome. It's a small change but significant in that the entire shape of the work will be different and include different points. Hannah has worked as a cleaner and I've worked in an office, so between us, I think we can imagine some scenarios that can be commented upon throughout the piece.

Also, this aspect changes some of the sound effects the piece will incorporate, such as the use of hoovering, sweeping and spraying. Not only do the sound effects become more varied but the environment can be changed now due to not having the restrictions of an office worker - the cleaner will visit many more places in a day than a worker and so this can work for us in terms of different atmospheres and scenarios.

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