Rough Cut

The rough cut has been completed and I'm fairly happy with it. There are some scenes which I think need tightening and I'm not entirely sure about transitions but as yet, there are no sound provisions but a guide track so I'm thinking there may be room for sound transitions. We have discussed using fades or cut to black in between passages of time but I am reluctant to do so unless there is further reasoning behind it. 

 The above shot will need colour correction and I plan on tightening this sequence after our tutorial. Below is some of the quick-cutting I did during the argument scene. Unsure of whether it is working or not so haven't done a lot of it as yet.

I am unsure about some of the shots that are included because some are soft focus where there is no other footage including the dialogue needed that I could cut to - i.e the father holding the flowers.