Feedback from the presentation

After presenting our project yesterday, I am quite pleased with the feedback we got. We recognised the faults that we had within the piece which the tutors picked up on and we got an interesting discussion in relation to the monotone internal dialogue from the group.

The piece was greeted with some laughter at the comical narration and I was pleased that our intent to create comic effect through the narrator was successful. We also wanted to create a build up of action and then a relief at the end when the window is opened and the cleaner smokes. The tutors commented that we'd made good use of building the atmosphere and then creating a relief which I was particularly pleased about.

Our panning worked out quite well but we think it was a little lost due to using speakers to present and not headphones - which would heighten the effect. Overall, I'm happy with the end result and I think our presentation went well.